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When I read this,there is no need to imagine the picture of what you write,I remember everything as it was the same.I like how you render mixed feelings,in my opinion it makes more impression than just mirth or grief for example would do.I enjoyed the whole poem and was smiling from the beginning till the end,but then sadness consumed me,because all these thing will never happen again as you wrote in the conclusion.I guess everyone who read your masterpiece would like to turn the time back and feel the happiness of childhood once more.There is nostalgia in every verse of the composition. It is surely one of the best poems on DeviantArt.
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